Fiction University: Want Better Characters? Get Rid of the Dialogue

Fiction University: Want Better Characters? Get Rid of the Dialogue: By Janice Hardy, @Janice_Hardy In novels, we often rely on what a character says to show who they are. Their actions also play a role, b...

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